A LONGING CALL
- Adventure Poem
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Could years pass
And the air still reek of my haunted past?
Could rivers flow
And still come to an abrupt end?
Could cherry trees blossom
And their bloom still fade?
Could mountains, hills and valleys stand
And the earth still holds them firm?
These questions I ask
My mind trapping them without an answer,
And with no one to reassure me
That I can be free from my bondage to fear;
A burden forced on me
By the harshly gust of nature enveloping my past!
One I am forced to bear
Its malodor hovering like a smoke
At what cost in life would be so enormous
To have the one thing I seek?
A thing much precious than all the riches in the embrace of the world;
One to overcome my fear,
And bring an end to shackles only I can see
Emeralds and pearls, I desire not
But the matching keys to my longing release
And if ever again I'll be able to walk,
I shall travel far and wide,
Proclaiming my return...
~Ciara
TORMENTED Heavy I walk Legs quivering with despair Holding me back so I may not reach that place I desire: A place I seek And have tried so much to reach, but to no avail This burden I bear This heaviness pulling me down with no desire of letting go! Making me wonder if it ever will Or shall remain till the day I'm called home To give an answer to the life that have yielded nothing, but utter pain... This is also a part of a longing call.
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Way to go @ ciara
@Lo is Thank you, dear
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Humn
The final quintain is so good a conclusion to highlight attaining freedom. What a nice piece!