Pierced Rose - Episode 79
The wedding
The girls were busy in Maggie's room getting there make up done while Reginah and Maggie were dealing with the bride's dress...
"Honey, are you sure about your decision concerning Brad???"
"Yeah, I am and I hope I am making the right choice..."
After Reginah wa done helping Maggie, she begun getting ready quickly since the Mamas had begun singing downstairs....
"Girls are you done???We are leaving in twenty minutes time.." Carlos bossed,"My gad Siz you ain't ready???"
"I was helping the bride get in her dress..." Reginah defended.
"Okay, read her this note it's from her husband to be..."
When Reginah was reading Maggie the note, she couldn't help but feel jealous... She always prayed and wished for a man like that but all she got was heartbreak...
Life threw her lemons and instead of making lemonade she ate them..
Hello my love, the D-day is here. But before I make the vows in church's, I wanna make them to you first. I will always love you, be by your side and whenever you feel bad or left out I will always hold your hand... I will make sure that I work hard to keep that beautiful smile All episodes of this story can be found here >> https://www.ebonystory.com/story/pierced-rose . I can't wait to make you officially my wife.
Greg.
Tears were balancing on Maggie's eyes as she tried fanning herself..
"It's good to cry honey but not now you will ruin your make up.."Reginah advised as Maggie mum covered her face with the veil while speaking blessings on her marriage...
In the church the bridegroom was fidgitating, waiting impatiently for the bride...
The entrance to the church by the bridesmaids and groomsmen was funny and crazy...
The men showed off their dance moves in their tuxedos whiles girls swayed their hips in their maroon sweetheart chiffon long dress..
Mike, Carlos, Jayson, Malcolm and Ben were the groomsmen whereas Reginah, Mary, Patience, Anna and Michelle were the bridesmaids.
There is nothing fun like your friends supporting you in your big day...
As Maggie walked down the aisle she could feel her insides churn and her knees shaking. Greg on the other hand tried so hard to fight the tears that tried so hard to embarrass him...
He couldn't believe he was finally making Maggie hers..
Everything was going on fine, Brad was busy looking at Reginah who was busy admiring the couple exchanging vows...
She was happy for Maggie and she wished nothing less for her and the one she would marry... Finally they were announced Mr and Mrs Gathimu as they danced their way out of church.
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The most awaited after party finally arrived as everyone made a circle and begun dancing around...
The bride and the groom were in the circle dancing and people followed their led.
After that everyone begun doing their own thing. Some eating, others drinking, others dancing and the rest were just seated...
Reginah was at a corner ogling at Jayson who was busy telling jokes to the newly weds when Brad tapped her shoulder.
"Hey???''
"What do you want Brad???" Reginah asked coldly turning around..
"I wish I said I am okay but you rejected my proposal infront of everyone.."
"Not everything is fixed with a ring..."
"But I am sorry and I want you back... Maybe next year would have been us getting married..."
"Brad do you remember how we used to argue, fight but get back together regardless???"
"Yes..."
"Do you remember when I got kidnapped you were at Isabelle's??? When I was about to get shot??? When I won the first time ??? When I won the second time??? When I learned how to ride????"
"Yes..."
"You weren't there."
Suddenly it dawned at him that when she always needed him he wasn't there but Jayson was...
"I came in Italy and heard you were there but when I came looking for you, you were busy kissing a girl..."
"That was you?? the girl who run away..." Brad rubbed his face nervously...
"Yeah...but it's a good thing since it made me realize we can't be... You just love me so much and I need someone who will always be there and not run away when our love is threatened."
"Don't do this," Brad took her hands," I love you so much. I care about. That day when I saw how you looked into Jayson's eyes during your race at Sakwa I felt like the intruder...I felt hurt how nobody noticed me and that's why I decided to leave..."
"You would have fought for what you claimed was yours but thank you because you made me realise you ain't the one I wanna spend my life with..."
"Please I will change," Brad knelt holding her legs, "I can't live without you..."
"Please Riri, what about the things we have been through????"
"I am sorry Brad, it's goodbye.."
Brad begun crying and pleading her so loud that he attracted everyone's attention...
"Bye.." Reginah pushed him aside.
Brad stood up and walked away pushing the waiter that walked past him...
After few minutes of weird tension everything went back to normal and it was time for her and Jayson to give their speeches...
"Hello guys, I know I am supposed to be talking about the newly weds but I just wanna say something... I fell in love with a very good man but as fate has it, we didn't last long... We were separated for years but his love for me kept him moving whereas I moved on... I thought I made the right choice until I realised when it was too late that it was always him... I dated and loved another because I was mad at him, because he showed me love when I lost all hopes, he made me feel alive when for years I had been dead but I never really loved him. I loved who he was not what I wanted..."
Their friends were now looking at Jayson who was shocked beyond imagination. He just sat there staring at her not believing the words coming out of her mouth...
"Jayson," She continued with a wet face,"I know I should have waited for, I know i should have trusted my love for you but I was mad.
Read " Bloody Fog " by the same author ( Fideh Mwangi )
. It has always been you... I have always loved you.. I tried so many times to give myself excuses but I can't anymore. I loved Brad but when I am with you I felt different. I felt like me. I wanted to be me. It's always more than love.. You have always being there when I needed someone to be and that is the kind of a person I want to spend the rest of my life with. Jayson i love you. I wanna be your Renah..."
Everyone was now astonished, their mouths wide open..
After the big confession, Jayson walked towards her and hugged her...
He could feel every nerve in his body suddenly flew at one spot..
His face pressed against hers and stared at her eyes for a moment before their mouths were locked onto each other...
They were both lost in the moment when then were disrupted with claps from the crowd...
"You will always be my Renah..."
"I loved you too my Renah..."
PS: Don't judge how things turned out. My opinion is Brad wasn't the right soul mate for Reginah..
Epilogue coming soon
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I hate this
Speechless
I think this is rt. Brad was such a baby no woman wants DAT.
No woman or man would want to be in Brad's position, where your partner always spend time with his or her ex.. Nobody can take that calmly.... I blame Renah, not Brad
I sincerely love this episode.. Brad didn't deserve her. Kudos to you writer. Much love I gat for you.
Yeah, he was not mature enough, she has taken a good decision. Thanks dear
Hmmmm, speechless
I agree with you Fideh ,Brad doesn't deserve Renah
I agree with UKbaby. .. after all we are human,is normal to feel insecure when you see your man or woman with their ex having a moment together..it places a lot of doubts
Its a story after all but looks soo real, I feel for Brad but happy for Riri, I just hope Brad will grow up from his childish acts. Fideh I doff my hat babe
Exactly @ukbaby..she used brad to get over jayson..her love for jayson was still dere..she claimed she loved brad but alwz diff around jason..i dont like d end part at all..this is not love to me..brad loves riri so much more dan she does to him..i hate ds episode?
Its riri that dosnt deserve brad...she didnt know wat she wanted..no man will feel ok with his babe around her ex, she just used brad to get over her heartbreak den..
I would av prefered she even go for for another guy entirely, not jayson..jayson neva respected her relationship with brad..he was always making himself available to steal her heart..
Riri does not deserved brad .how can you always be around your ex. Brad is also a human. Brad is been treated unfair.
You spoke my mind @crownwealth
Well, let's just say they didn't deserve each other and Riri never got over Jayson. It's all good though, Brad shd man up in his next relationship. Great story Fideh
I feel bad for Brad, cos Rena was his girl who made him believe in true love. it's a sad story cos it's alwaysbeen Rena n Brad, and with dis it's shows that Brad was really an intruder and Rena never really loved him. it's so sad but I hope brad find his soul mate.
Thank you guys
Guys Jayson always respected their relationship, but they were riders...Brad was so insecure that he forgot to trust her...Reginah loved Brad but he was never there when she needed someone....But Jayson was. And when he left for Spain, he made her realise Jayson was always there and he never left willingly and that's why she chose him. Some people are better being your friends than lovers
the truth is u cannot believe in another love wen u are always around ur first love. I love u Fidel but Rena should not v ended up with Jayson, maybe someone else but not him cos now Brad was right all along cos he saw dis coming dats was y he left to Spain at first. Brad was childish, yes but thats were loves comes in. it's just Rena and Jayson now.
I support u @amina..jayson was always available cos of wat he wanta to get..yes brad was not alwz dere wen she needs him nd its not sumtin done on purpose..tell me which man will feel secured with his gf ex alwaz around her..she neva got over jayso..fine, brad was childish but he loves her geniunely..even if she didnt end up with brad, i wish it was sum1 else not jason..@fideh, u are a perfect writer..jayson never respected deir relationship, he was alwz around her..i remember wen my ex was still keeping in touch constantly wit me, i almost lost focus if not for GOD and my man..Love thosnt work ds way..she is better off without jayson...
I almost lost my man then cos of my ex who happened to be my best friend.. I was always comparing them consciously or subconsciously. You won't get over ur ex when you are always around them. Jayson only made Brad look incompetent cos he's always around her.. What do you expect Brad to do? To just suck it up as if everything is OK? Most of us can't even stand opposite sex as our spouse's friend, not to talk about an ex
@ukbaby, exactly..jayson made her start comparing, he made brad look like a fool and someone that dosnt know what he wants..he wasnt ready to accept she has moved on cos he still saw d love for hin in her eyes..seriously i dnt like dis episode at all..anyways its a story, kudos to u @fideh
I agree with you , there is no way one can be a best friend to an ex lover, knowing fully well that they were so much in love. So riri still loved Jason but refused to accept it at first, becouse she is looking for something to hold on against brad . So brad was right afteral.
I hate this!!! I feel so terrible and I wish I never ended this story. My day is officially ruined. I agreed Brad was childish, but he loved her beyond words.
I think u need to do justice to Brad by making him happy too. He lost almost everything. I don't like Riri for this lol. Jayson, also never actually respected her relationship. Always using riding as an excuse. Brad was right to feel insecure after all. Who would appreciate your gf being around her ex 24hrs? It's insane. Please I'm protesting for Brad to get justice. Let him get someone to mend his ?. It's too bad and I can't help but feel terrible.
Its true that Brad behaved childishly,, but no man in his right sense will want to have the woman he loves constantly in the company of another man , lest of all her ex, even if they are colleagues. Remember when Jayson and Regina was training together ,she hardly had time for Brad , even when he came to take her out , she declined ,giving him unnecessary excuses. , it would be easy for him conclude that he is not probably needed. Another problem they had was that they hardly communicate with each other , I mean heart to heart . They hardly discuss issues together. Whenever they are together , they always end up in bed .there is more to relationship than just having sex, and besides it's even wrong of them to be having sex when not married (my personal opinion). So I think both should share the blame ,,and so I rest my case . Thumbs up Fideh for a job well done. Keep it up.
Oya! Where's Isabella?
Riri made aright choice by choosing Jay. Am happy for her.
Then if this story goes like this. If Jason and Regina were meant to be together , then isabell and brad are also meant to be. Where is she even , i hope she's now ok? I am heart broken honestly. I hate you Regina and Jason Brad remains my man.
@Tony as team Jayson am offended
Am very disappointed, but it's all Gus Riri didn't deserve Brad after all. Nice story though
Am very disappointed, but it's all Gus Riri didn't deserve Brad after all. Nice story though
As they alsways say,first love never dies,as in this case Jayson's love for renah never died nor did renah's love for Jayson
Wow! I'm so glad Jay and Renah ended up together. I agree with you fideh, Brad and Regina were not made for each other. While Jayson is cool headed and always calm down to understand things, Brad is rather the opposite. He flares up without even trying to listen to what you've got to say. And that attitude almost got Regina killed. Just imagine, he had a fight with his girlfriend, he ran off to his ex for comfort which gave that bitch Isabella the opportunity to get Regina kidnapped. If Jayson hadn't followed and took the gunshot instead, Regina might have died. And definitely he'll only mourn her death for a while and then move on. Jayson actually came back to explain things to Regina and get her back but on seeing her with someone else, he let go bcuz he wants her to be happy. So, Jayson loves Regina so much and he's always there for her. TEAM JAYSON ALL THE WAY!!!. Thanks so much for this interesting story Fideh ??? High five,?????????? and thumbs up,???????.
WOW! I'm so glad Jay and Renah ended up together. I agree with you Fideh, Regina and Brad were not made for each other. Jayson is cool-headed and he always calm down to understand things but Brad is rather the opposite. He flares up unnecessarily and that attitude almost got Regina killed. Just imagine, he had a quarrel with his girlfriend, he ran to his Ex for comfort and that was what gave that bitch,Isabella, the chance to kidnap Renah. If Jayson hadn't followed and took the gunshot instead, Regina might have died and then definitely, Brad will mourn and her death for a while, what next??? He'll move on. Jayson leaving Renah was quite understandeable, she won't be able to take Jayson's death, even he wasn't sure he was gonna survive. Jayson came back to explain things and get Regina back but on seeing her with someone else, he let go bcuz he wants her to be happy. Jay loves Renah so much and he's always there for her. TEAM JAYSON ALL THE WAY. Thank you so much for this fantastic story Fideh ???. High five ?????????? and thumbs up ??????